ext_198958 ([identity profile] oviparous.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] floweranza 2009-03-08 05:13 am (UTC)

i liked this. :)

it was well-written, at a good pace, and you used that scene in the dressing scene really well. aiba jumping with the brush and nino thinking he was cute was a nice touch. good job!

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