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2009-03-08 05:13 am (UTC)
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i liked this. :)
it was well-written, at a good pace, and you used that scene in the dressing scene really well. aiba jumping with the brush and nino thinking he was cute was a nice touch. good job!
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it was well-written, at a good pace, and you used that scene in the dressing scene really well. aiba jumping with the brush and nino thinking he was cute was a nice touch. good job!