Motivation - slowly disappearing, killed by snark.

[floweranza]

With some motivation I'm trying to write a fic, really really, but I feel like I've made a grave mistake from the very beginning.

That is, writing from Nino's POV! Does anyone else find him immensely hard to write? Adlkfkjff?

Aiba-chan looks pale and wan. Something in Nino's chest thrums at the sight, but the kindness he's trying to find turns into sharpness before it comes out as speech. That's all that's been happening, lately.

Dammit, Neeners.

Comments

[ferinough.livejournal.com]

KAZNEENERZ. Actually, I find him the easiest to write. Nino and Sho. But this is, perhaps, because their personalities are closest to mine so it's easier for me to slip into their mindset.

I write tons and tons of fiction because I'm lame. *blush* I'd be happy to beta for you if you feel like you could use some help! :D

And I think what you have is a good start. It definitely conveys the message anyway. <3

[floweranza.livejournal.com]

I think I should've tried writing a normal Nino first, since this is a (sort of) slowly unraveling Nino who can't help himself from getting meaner and meaner. D: Something like that, at any rate!

It's not lameness, it's totally alright. Or so we should say, ne. Ahaha. In any case, thanks so much! When I have something resembling a chapter/one-shot, maybe I can send it your way?

Yaaaay! I'll ganbare, ganbare.

[ferinough.livejournal.com]

Oh I see. Sounds interesting! Putting down a few thoughts is good, you don't always have to start at the beginning. But yeah, getting comfortable with the character first before you start digging deeper is probably a more preferable way of going about it.

Sure thing! Let me know. You know my LJ, and my email is snapeisawhat@gmail.com. I love reading through things and giving suggestions if it's asked of me. But I've never used a beta myself, so no worries if you don't end up doing so.

Good luck! :D

[whoompah.livejournal.com]

aww, I never tried writing from Neen's POV actually so I wouldn't know D:

aww but good luck! I'd love to read what you write 83

[ruisetsuna.livejournal.com]

Since I'm no expert in writing, if I tell you instead that I just finished your request, would that help? ♥ :D

[floweranza.livejournal.com]

Uh-huh! ♥♥