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That day was the sixth day of her waiting. It was as hot as any other. The heat of the land leaked out of the ground and blurred the air, creating a false illusion of movement. Everything was still, though; still and dry and cracked. The land itself stretched like this in all directions. Lizards lazily made their way through the scattered bits of rock upon the plateau and hunting birds spiraled overhead, searching for easy prey. The air itself was acrid.

It stuck in your lungs and stayed so for many hours.

She clambered over the rocks, swearing softly as her thumb stubbed itself in a nook and leaked red. From overhead, this place was evident as one of the great masses of rock that interrupted the smooth, sweeping plane of the land. The rocks here were dry and sore-red.

As her fingers went to the leather water canteen slung around her hips, she perched herself upon the rock. The girl drank down two deep gulps, and then corked it again. She was a child of this land, and water was sacred. She shaded her eyes with her hand and looked to the west.

Heat wove its tight hold around her and the rock and everything else. The sky was a glorious blue that did not speak of rain, and the ground itself seemed to groan in agony amongst the silence. She sat still, as still as the landscape around her, and waited. It was the sixth day.

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From an automative writing exercise. There's something I really like about these places, for some reason. I end up writing about them a lot.

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Date: 2007-02-22 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gypsyardor.livejournal.com
You are definitely a gifted writer, Eve. I think I like your writing even more than your sketches. :)

XOXO

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Date: 2007-02-22 01:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] floweranza.livejournal.com
Well, actually, going back to read this I'm not very satisfied with it at all... but it's not bad for a 5-minute writing exercise. XD

♥ Thanks!

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Date: 2007-02-22 07:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamdictator.livejournal.com
My my my...multi talented Eve ^___^ It's lovely hon, really :) I'de love to see more.

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Date: 2007-02-22 01:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] floweranza.livejournal.com
Actually, I've had a story like this kind of in mind for like... years... um, yeah, I never actually bother to sit down and write anything.

(Sorry about last night, blablablab. :O)

Thaaaanks! ♥

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Date: 2007-02-22 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamdictator.livejournal.com
Well, it's a good story, and it's good that you're finally giving it life. As for last night, don't apologize silly! I'm here what ever you need

<3♥<3♥<3♥

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Date: 2007-02-22 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] floweranza.livejournal.com
[lol] [lovelove]

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Date: 2007-02-22 03:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pure-faye.livejournal.com
Beautiful! :)

*is amazed* XD

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Date: 2007-02-22 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] floweranza.livejournal.com
Yay! Thanks. XD I might polish it up, 'cause I like it too - but it's got a million awkward places right now!

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